I like the way you have framed it so that there is a loose border on the sides there. Part of me feels that you could have shot it closer so that the main subject matter took more room, I guess you could say.
I wouldn't mind seeing this in colour, but it feels more concentrated in black and white. Part of me feels that... eh, you could rotate it, but it's better in portrait, I think.
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